d_m poem lekh na

[innocent princess 0]

Sabai keti's ko poem suni sakyo, Timro matra baki, lekhna euta.

[manchilds friend 0]

This is on behalf of D_M who is at present unable to be online.

 

she has asked me to write this reply:

 

1) whats the point of writing poems no one understands

2) i cannot be bothered

3) there is no no.3

4) i cannot be bothered

5) as nos. 1-4

6) i dont want to write a pile of cra.p just because everyone else says

7) M_F hasnt written a poem

8) what is the point of a poem

9) i dont have the time .. haha it rhymes (rhyming couplet)

10) this is turning out be a poem

11) why do you keep reading this list

12) stop reading .. its over

13) you fool

Edited September 25, 2005 by manchilds friend

[distant_memory 0]

soz...we were just messing around hijo. i guess no 14 would be i'm rubbish at writing literature...i was glad when my english literature days were over!

 

it seems everyone has a story to tell and i personally don't have any interesting ones that i can portray through my very unpoetical language. i'll leave that to you guys who are experts at it. it would actually be nice if you guys could annotate the poems such that us lay people could get the sense of it and see if what we're interpreting is correct.

[innocent princess 0]

Check my poems . I have fews !! Your poem was unethical but unique , well done

 

Poems always have to be more closed than widely understanding, that why it is called poems. Poems goes where your mind will take. For interpretation, everyone has different minds.

 

try another one

[distant_memory 0]

Check my poems . I have fews !! Your poem was unethical but unique , well done

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thanks. i know it's unique re kya...mf and i masterminded it together! as for unethical, there is no ethics involved for it to be unethical.

 

as for trying again, no i'll leave that job to you guys.