Photo Kabita

[Jamee 0]

 

Hey priya.....

Jab kahilei pani timi udaas hunechhau

Mero samjhana timi sangai hunechha,

Bhitri manabata jab garnechhau yaad mero

Mero najikai bhayeko abhaas paunechhau!

[Sushil Pradhan 0]

 

All are wonderful, keep it up sister.

[surendras 0]

Window girl!

 

Standing alongside the ancint window

though full of modern view and vigour

tangled with family values and boundaries

wondow girl, do you want to fly?

break the cage and break the tradition

oppressed by age old primitive dogma

your tearful eyes say it all

wait for no one, step away from the threshold

right there you would see me

ready to embrace

will you fly with me?

 

Uhi,

Suren.

Edited December 10, 2005 by surendras

[surendras 0]

Here is the matching photo for "the window girl"

[prachi 0]

 

A week back, when I was making my journey to Mumbai from Delhi (by train), I met a young Gujrati girl who has just finished her B.Com. During the journey, I had few hrs with her and caught her furture dream. She have a nice and lovely dream.

 

Here..I am trying to make a short poem of her dream what I listened by her tongue.

 

stL ;'Gb/ cgL stL dg df]xs

d]/f] Tof] ;do xf]nf,

h'g lbg d]/f ;fd'

d]/f] dgsf] vf]h xf]nf,

dfofsf] df6f]n] lnk]sf]

Pp6f 3/ xf]nf,

h;df rGbf / ;'/hsf ;fy

OdfGbf/Lsf] Pp6f a]Un} ;F;f/ xf]nf .

 

[ram dotyal 0]

 

aLxfgsf] l77'/] t'iff/f]

lbp;f]sf] lr;f] xfjf

cgL ;fdmF sf]

z/L/ lrg]{ zLt,

kxLn] kxLn] efUg] uy]{

n'Sg] uy]{

6f9}af6 klG5g] uy]{

of] lbNnL sf] lr;f] b]lv

t/ o; kfnL eg] cfkmg} nfU5

d]/f] h:t} nfU5

of] lbNnLsf] ;bL{ ..

 

 

[zen_spirit 0]

YOU ARE THE MOON I GOT

 

I fought hard to reach you, bonny

Caring not for what may come

All the harshness, all hurdles

Couldn’t shake my dreamy dome

Rash I was, and lonesome

 

You are my harbor, darling

I aimed you through raged, stormy waves

You are my only beacon

That led my ship to life that’s safe

Yes, you are my treasure sought

You are the moon I got

Now believe me or not

You are the moon I got

 

 

My body, my soul’s but all soaked

And chilling sea-wind’s still with me

Now hold me and heal me out this torment

Soothe my heart and set it free

Yes, I can’t help adoring a lot

You are the moon I got

Please, forsake me not

You are the moon I got

 

So, lets sail as one and forget our past

There waits new ocean unexplored, vast

To face more storms, I fear not

‘Coz you are the moon I got

We’ll dare, we’ll share and care so much

You are the moon I got

Yes, you are the moon I got

( nepalgunj, 2001 )

Edited January 4, 2006 by zen_spirit

[Nakkalee 0]

 

aLxfgsf] l77'/] t'iff/f]

lbp;f]sf] lr;f] xfjf

cgL ;fdmF sf]

z/L/ lrg]{ zLt,

kxLn] kxLn] efUg] uy]{

n'Sg] uy]{

6f9}af6 klG5g] uy]{

of] lbNnL sf] lr;f] b]lv

t/ o; kfnL eg] cfkmg} nfU5

d]/f] h:t} nfU5

of] lbNnLsf] ;bL{ ..

 

 

 

Jab pyar ho jaye sardi mein wo bhi sard ki khubsoorti se to fir kya ........

 

Nice written, btw.

[Jamee 0]

 

d]/f] zx/ 6Lsfk'/

 

 

lg/f; w/ftn

j];'/f /ftx?

lg;fl:;Psf] k|eft

:yLtLn] PSnf] kg,

gt s'g} zAbx? 5g

gt s'g} sxfgL

vf]hL /x]5

kxLn]s} df};d

x/fof] sxf

Tof] zfGtL, v'zL

xtf; zx/

kn kn vf]hL /x]5

cfkm' d}

cfkmgf] dxTj

of t km]/L

cfkm'df dnfO g}

d]/f] zx/ 6Lsfk'/ .

 

sZdL/f zfx

dfn] ufj, ef/t

[surendras 0]

I would like to Thank everyone for taking time to participate in this thread. It's been a savouring experince all along. Please do continue to pour your feelings. Here I continue.......

 

ऊनी ले मलाई सम्झिइन रे!

 

ऊनी ले मलाई सम्झिइन रे!

त्यो समुद्रि तटमा

ती एकलास बगरहरु बिच

एक सुन्दर बिहानीमा

मेरै नाम लिईन रे!

बालुवा किनारै-किनार दौडडै हर ढुक-‍ढुकिमा

मलाई सम्झिईन रे!

हावाका झोकाहरुले

कानेखुसी गरे रे!

ती चिरबिर चरिहरुले

मेरै नाम लिए रे!

मलाई थाहा भएन-२

म तिमी सामु भएको भए के गर्थे हुँला

सायद तिमीसँगै ती समुद्र तटमा दौडदै

टाढा क्षितिज नाप्थे हुँला

अनि हातेमाले गर्दै भविष्यको सुन्दर कल्पनामा हराउँथे होला

तिम्रो त्यो पाउजुको झंकारमा

सुन्दर नयनहरु नियाली रहन्थे होला

ती नील नयनहरुलाई चुम्थे होला

मलाई हरबखत “मेल” लेख्ने ती औलाहरु चुम्थे होला

थाहा भएन

सायद तिमीलाई

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