zen_spirit 0 Report post Posted October 25, 2004 mitra, chhundaina ooth raksile tara mazza thah chha pyunuko kalpanamai sahi jivan ka harek aayam jyunuko kaile hunchhu premi kaile prem kaatne tarwar kaile chhunchhu akash kaile paatal ko durbar kaile hakchhu puspak swyam kaile pau dhuloma kaile saagar pyunchhu kaile bagi janchhu kuloma kaile magchhu dailo dailo kaile dinchhu singo desh kaile pagal bani firchhu kaile sadhuko saumya bhesh aankha dui chhan mera tara herne drishti sahastrar bagdo kholale dekchha jasari hajaar thari kinaar kavita pichhe roop ferchhu mul roop mero arkai chha antarmukhi, mast, akampa khojchha na bismaat na harsha ata: paatralai 'ma' nathannus baru paatra lai jannus sabda padhi birsidinus 'bhav' lai mukhya mannus ...purnima sakiyeko chhina ..so, dashain wish sahit !!! ... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zen_spirit 0 Report post Posted October 25, 2004 SUBHAKAMANA: TIMRAI NIMTI Ravi prabhatma udaos naudaos Udaun timra su-dinharu Chandani raatma chamkiyos nachamkiyos Chamkirahun timra mrigalochanharu Jivandeep chahe nibhos mero Nanibhun timra chahanaharu Tukriyos mala mero bhagyodayako Natutun timra aakanshyaharu Bhatkiyos mero samagra vipana Tara sakaar houn timra sapanaharu Dubos baru mero yathartha sansaar Nadubun timra kalpanaharu 58343[/snapback] kin garnu hunchha sadaa khusi rahaun uni bhaner?? kunai din ta dukhi hune dua pani garnus ek choti ta.. dhokaa dinadherai sajilo chha Saathi maya garer maya laai nibhaunu dherai nai kathin chha hajur laai choder jaane mayalu pani kasto ? saacho maya bhayeko bhaye ta uni pani tadpinthin holaa hajur jasto... 58346[/snapback] mitra, chhundaina ooth raksile tara mazza thah chha pyunuko kalpanamai sahi jivan ka harek aayam jyunuko kaile hunchhu premi kaile prem kaatne tarwar kaile chhunchhu akash kaile paatal ko durbar kaile hakchhu puspak swyam kaile pau dhuloma kaile saagar pyunchhu kaile bagi janchhu kuloma kaile magchhu dailo dailo kaile dinchhu singo desh kaile pagal bani firchhu kaile sadhuko saumya bhesh aankha dui chhan mera tara herne drishti sahastrar bagdo kholale dekchha jasari hajaar thari kinaar kavita pichhe roop ferchhu mul roop mero arkai chha antarmukhi, mast, akampa na chha bismaat na harsha ata: paatralai 'ma' nathannus baru paatra lai jannus sabda padhi birsidinus 'bhav' lai mukhya mannus ...purnima sakiyeko chhina ..so, dashain wish sahit !!! ... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
narayan_thapa007 0 Report post Posted October 26, 2004 SUBHAKAMANA: TIMRAI NIMTI Ravi prabhatma udaos naudaos Udaun timra su-dinharu Chandani raatma chamkiyos nachamkiyos Chamkirahun timra mrigalochanharu Jivandeep chahe nibhos mero Nanibhun timra chahanaharu Tukriyos mala mero bhagyodayako Natutun timra aakanshyaharu Bhatkiyos mero samagra vipana Tara sakaar houn timra sapanaharu Dubos baru mero yathartha sansaar Nadubun timra kalpanaharu 58343[/snapback] kin garnu hunchha sadaa khusi rahaun uni bhaner?? kunai din ta dukhi hune dua pani garnus ek choti ta.. dhokaa dinadherai sajilo chha Saathi maya garer maya laai nibhaunu dherai nai kathin chha hajur laai choder jaane mayalu pani kasto ? saacho maya bhayeko bhaye ta uni pani tadpinthin holaa hajur jasto... 58346[/snapback] mitra, chhundaina ooth raksile tara mazza thah chha pyunuko kalpanamai sahi jivan ka harek aayam jyunuko kaile hunchhu premi kaile prem kaatne tarwar ...purnima sakiyeko chhina ..so, dashain wish sahit !!! ... 58352[/snapback] raksi ko nishaa ma nadubnu mitra banauchha kam bigarchha dherai aafu aafumai na harainu mitra man ma aashaa ko diyo baali mutu ma papini ko photo raakhi mazza ta mayalu ko nyano angalo ma chha raksi ma ke mazza hola ra mitra ? jindagi ko chahanaa haru kalpanaa ma matrai simita kin bhanu hunchha?? sakar garne shamtta chha hajur thim aaj pani Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Himal Rai 0 Report post Posted November 20, 2004 euta purano hai ta! Priya bhut ta bitisakyo bartaman-bawisya sochna parekochha manma utheka anekau prashnaharu afule afulai nai sodhna parekochha adha batoma nai alpatra pareu priya aaj swayam afule afulai nai khojna parekochha. Timi jati nai nisthuri bhaye pani timro muhar yi nayanharu aghi ghuminai rahanchha bigatlai bhulne kayo prayatna gare timro aawaj yi kanharuam ghunjinai rahanchha afulai sambhalne dherai dherai prayash gare tar yo mutu timro yadma tadpinai rahanchha. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Naaz 0 Report post Posted November 21, 2004 Kasle bhanchha Manisharu chhayeka chhan yas sansaar maa? Yo dharti ta tyo ho Jahan Ishwor Parameshowr bikdachhan, Hami ta manav matra hau Manavharuko yaha kaha mulya chha? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
narayan_thapa007 0 Report post Posted December 8, 2004 (edited) Suren ji garnus maya jindagi sanga yeti ki kam paros hajur lai yo jooni pani harek dhokaa saher pani hasnu chha hajur laai ghau jati dukhe pani sahnu nai parchha hajur le ... garnus mayaa hajur le yeti aafu sanga jati hajur le garna pani saknu hunna hola uni sanga aama-bubaa nai ho bhagwan ko aarko rup uni sanga nai shikhnu jindagi jiuna.... jati gunaso gare pani bachnu nai parchha yo jindagi haami le jati nai dhoka khaye pani hasnu nai parchha haami le feri kin....kin...kin.. Suren jii jindagi sanga gunaso maile bujhnai sakina....?? Edited December 8, 2004 by narayan_thapa007 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
surendras 0 Report post Posted December 20, 2004 Muktak kehi man bhitrai bata...... Sapanaharu hun nindrama aru badhi sutnaka lagi Samjhanaharu hun dhuru dhuru royera basnaka lagi, Smashantir gairaheko murdalai aawaaz nadeu Yo sansaarma aayeka hau hami sabai....ek din janakai lagi!! 63899[/snapback] thikai bhannu bhayo ramilajee, we all here to go,some day- sooner or latter. jeendagiko shashwat satya ta mrityu nai ho, akaTya amurta satya. tapai haruko juhari padher malai pani kehi lekhna mana laagyo raati aakashma tolauda dekhe jun rudaichhina sukka sukka mero mana jastai ek tamasle pheri dekhe jun aaphnaa baahoole samudra baaT pani lie mukh dhudaichhin mero manalai maile kasari dhune?? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sujita 0 Report post Posted December 27, 2004 Surajko tato raaple Dadhnu dhartilai pareko chha, Dhoka aakhako hunchha Tadpinu manlai pareko chha ! What a nice piece! Thank you Naaz ji. Tapai aunu bhayo ta feri yaha basanta aayo, chhayo poems sectionma feri hariyali. Please! keep it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
surendras 0 Report post Posted January 11, 2005 म सग केहि छैन तिम्रा लागि दिने म आफै सुन्य भएको बेला! एक मुठि खुशि माग्दै हिडेको छु आज जीवनले यस्तो मोड लियो सब भाग्यको खेला!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ramkharel 0 Report post Posted February 4, 2005 Sunsan Raatma Adhyaro Kothari Bata Kasaile Sahara Magey Jasto Lagchha Anbigya Kaya Eaklo tyo Dharatal Ma Bhoutaridai Mera Dui Kadam Aahat Ko Pratikchha Kina Sachchha???? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
