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Priya...!

Bihaniko adhuro sapana hau timi

Na latthidai band bhayo

Tyo Nasha hau timi

Haatko mutthi bata futkiyeko

Mero man ko dor hau timi

Tadha bhayeu chhuttiyeu

Sagar samma nai pugyeu

Tar Sagar ma pani chhuttiyeu

Maile bujhe priya

Mera aakha bata niskeko pavitra jal hau timi.

 

Jahan heru jahan jau

Bas dekhchhu timi nai timi

Yadi nidauchhu ta

Sapanima bhetinchhau timi

Mero har khushi har dukkha

Har palharuma timi

Har pal sangai rahera pani

Priya,

Tadha kasari bhai diyeu timi?

 

Prabhat ko lali dekhna napaudai

Harayeka kiran hau timi

Gham ke sakiyo din ko hare

Harayeka chhaya hau timi

Tyo raat feri audaichha

Tyo joon pani lagnechha

Timi hunechhau ta tyo joon

Joon jhai lagnechha

Priya,

Auchhauki ki timi?

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mero laagi yo asambhav chha priya....

ki ma timro man ko dhukdhuki hunsakchhu bhani....

tara ma timi sanga dherai nai maya garchhu priya......

tara sabai laai kin bhandai hiDu......

 

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Priya...!

Bihaniko adhuro sapana hau timi

Na latthidai band bhayo

Tyo Nasha hau timi

Haatko mutthi bata futkiyeko

Mero man ko dor hau timi

Tadha bhayeu chhuttiyeu

Sagar samma nai pugyeu

Tar Sagar ma pani chhuttiyeu

Maile bujhe priya

Mera aakha bata niskeko pavitra jal hau timi.

 

Jahan heru jahan jau

Bas dekhchhu timi nai timi

Yadi nidauchhu ta

Sapanima bhetinchhau timi

Mero har khushi har dukkha

Har palharuma timi

Har pal sangai rahera pani

Priya,

Tadha kasari bhai diyeu timi?

 

Prabhat ko lali dekhna napaudai

Harayeka kiran hau timi

Gham ke sakiyo din ko hare

Harayeka chhaya hau timi

Tyo raat feri audaichha

Tyo joon pani lagnechha

Timi hunechhau ta tyo joon

Joon jhai lagnechha

Priya,

Auchhauki ki timi?

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What a wonderful piece this is. Beglai khalko ani dherai man chhune kavita aaj pahilo patak padhna paye chautarima. Thank you very much Jamee ji and warm welcome to come to chautari. And hoping to read more touching poems from you.

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Priya...!

Bihaniko adhuro sapana hau timi

Na latthidai band bhayo

Tyo Nasha hau timi

Haatko mutthi bata futkiyeko

Mero man ko dor hau timi

Tadha bhayeu chhuttiyeu

Sagar samma nai pugyeu

Tar Sagar ma pani chhuttiyeu

Maile bujhe priya

Mera aakha bata niskeko pavitra jal hau timi.

 

Jahan heru jahan jau

Bas dekhchhu timi nai timi

Yadi nidauchhu ta

Sapanima bhetinchhau timi

Mero har khushi har dukkha

Har palharuma timi

Har pal sangai rahera pani

Priya,

Tadha kasari bhai diyeu timi?

 

Prabhat ko lali dekhna napaudai

Harayeka kiran hau timi

Gham ke sakiyo din ko hare

Harayeka chhaya hau timi

Tyo raat feri audaichha

Tyo joon pani lagnechha

Timi hunechhau ta tyo joon

Joon jhai lagnechha

Priya,

Auchhauki ki timi?

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Priyasee, hataar kina ?

 

Aajai ta aaiichheu hataar kina?

Gara kuraa saath sangai

Kuraa prem kahaaneemaa

Sangai milera sunna

Kehee samaya laagchha nai,

Bichaleet chhau yati kina

Bachapanako muTu pheree joDna?

Man sanga man milna

Sur - taal milaauna

Purai umer panee bitna sakchha,

Jeevan yo khel hoina

Ki haansee khelee

KshaN bharmai puraa hos

Kehee tarangaharu lyaaunamaa

Jyaan panee jaana sakchha,

Aaj aaechheu, yahaa saath chheu

Ma chaahanchhu ki tyo

Aba ke chaahiyo jindageemaa

Je chha sabai bhandaa thulo chha

Jun haamro aaj pheree milan bhayo

SamarpaN ko samaya lyaaunalaaee

Shwaashaharu panee banda huna sakchhan,

Kasaiko najik hunu bhannu nai

Ki ta sansaar jaaos ki ta jeeu jyaan

Umerako garnu ke

Yahee din harauna panee saktachha !!

 

 

Maile saachera raakheko chhu bachapanakaa har palaharulaaee jun haamro ek amit smritee ho. Aaj yo ghaDeemaa aaee yahaa bheT bhayo ra dherai nai khushee laagyo. A very warm welcome to Chautari. I hope to talk many more in the coming moments. Where are you now, by the way?

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This kinds of stuffs sucks to me. I know, it's a poem and nothing more but even that I am a wife yar! Sawal hi paida nahin hota hai, kis biwi ko jalan nahin hotee. mad.giftongue.gif

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Priya...!

Bihaniko adhuro sapana hau timi

Na latthidai band bhayo

Tyo Nasha hau timi

Haatko mutthi bata futkiyeko

Mero man ko dor hau timi

Tadha bhayeu chhuttiyeu

Sagar samma nai pugyeu

Tar Sagar ma pani chhuttiyeu

Maile bujhe priya

Mera aakha bata niskeko pavitra jal hau timi.

 

Jahan heru jahan jau

Bas dekhchhu timi nai timi

Yadi nidauchhu ta

Sapanima bhetinchhau timi

Mero har khushi har dukkha

Har palharuma timi

Har pal sangai rahera pani

Priya,

Tadha kasari bhai diyeu timi?

 

Prabhat ko lali dekhna napaudai

Harayeka kiran hau timi

Gham ke sakiyo din ko hare

Harayeka chhaya hau timi

Tyo raat feri audaichha

Tyo joon pani lagnechha

Timi hunechhau ta tyo joon

Joon jhai lagnechha

Priya,

Auchhauki ki timi?

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Priya...!

Bihaniko adhuro sapana hau timi

Na latthidai band bhayo

Tyo Nasha hau timi

Haatko mutthi bata futkiyeko

Mero man ko dor hau timi

Tadha bhayeu chhuttiyeu

Sagar samma nai pugyeu

Tar Sagar ma pani chhuttiyeu

Maile bujhe priya

Mera aakha bata niskeko pavitra jal hau timi.

 

Jahan heru jahan jau

Bas dekhchhu timi nai timi

Yadi nidauchhu ta

Sapanima bhetinchhau timi

Mero har khushi har dukkha

Har palharuma timi

Har pal sangai rahera pani

Priya,

Tadha kasari bhai diyeu timi?

 

Prabhat ko lali dekhna napaudai

Harayeka kiran hau timi

Gham ke sakiyo din ko hare

Harayeka chhaya hau timi

Tyo raat feri audaichha

Tyo joon pani lagnechha

Timi hunechhau ta tyo joon

Joon jhai lagnechha

Priya,

Auchhauki ki timi?

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Priyasee, hataar kina ?

 

Aajai ta aaiichheu hataar kina?

Gara kuraa saath sangai

Kuraa prem kahaaneemaa

Sangai milera sunna

Kehee samaya laagchha nai,

Bichaleet chhau yati kina

Bachapanako muTu pheree joDna?

Man sanga man milna

Sur - taal milaauna

Purai umer panee bitna sakchha,

Jeevan yo khel hoina

Ki haansee khelee

KshaN bharmai puraa hos

Kehee tarangaharu lyaaunamaa

Jyaan panee jaana sakchha,

Aaj aaechheu, yahaa saath chheu

Ma chaahanchhu ki tyo

Aba ke chaahiyo jindageemaa

Je chha sabai bhandaa thulo chha

Jun haamro aaj pheree milan bhayo

SamarpaN ko samaya lyaaunalaaee

Shwaashaharu panee banda huna sakchhan,

Kasaiko najik hunu bhannu nai

Ki ta sansaar jaaos ki ta jeeu jyaan

Umerako garnu ke

Yahee din harauna panee saktachha !!

 

 

Maile saachera raakheko chhu bachapanakaa har palaharulaaee jun haamro ek amit smritee ho. Aaj yo ghaDeemaa aaee yahaa bheT bhayo ra dherai nai khushee laagyo. A very warm welcome to Chautari. I hope to talk many more in the coming moments. Where are you now, by the way?

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Dada, Is this your real story or just a poetry version. Seems to me, you both were very closed friends or.... tongue.gif from childhood. She is also from our heaven, I think. Below is here details (I found on her ID):

 

Dipika

Surname: Shah

High School: Birendra Vidhyapith

Village/Town: Tikapur

District: Kailali

Current University/College: Citizen Welfare Education Society's (SCOE)

Subject: Culture

Town/City: Budhwar Wada, Malegaon

Place of Birth: No Information

Web site: No Information

Gender: Female

 

But where is this Budhwar Wada, Malegaon?

 

This kinds of stuffs sucks to me. I know, it's a poem and nothing more but even that I am a wife yar! Sawal hi paida nahin hota hai, kis biwi ko jalan nahin hotee.  mad.gif  tongue.gif

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Dada, Is this your real story or just a poetry version. Seems to me, you both were very closed friends or.... tongue.gif from childhood. She is also from our heaven, I think. 

 

But where is this Budhwar Wada, Malegaon?

On behalf of your brother, It's only poetry version and in fact she is also very good writer. Yes, they were very good friends from childhood. She is younger sister of our big family sister, not other. Before, she were studying in Mihipur of MP. Now she is studying in Malegaon. Malegaon is in Maharasthra and it takes 7 hrs to reach to Malegaon from Mumbai. Herdai jau aba Jeeja ra Saali ko poetry version kaha samma pugchha. tongue.gif

 

This kinds of stuffs sucks to me. I know, it's a poem and nothing more but even that I am a wife yar! Sawal hi paida nahin hota hai, kis biwi ko jalan nahin hotee.  mad.gif  tongue.gif

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Don't laugh on me, ok? huh?? mad.gif

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Priya....

 

Euta sundar sapana

Maile feri herna suru gare

Jab afnai manma haat rakhi

Afailai sodhe tab

Manle dikkat na mani samjhayo,

"Jamee,

Nadeeka duii kinarara

Dharti ani aakash

Dhan ani hrin

Din ani raat

Andhyaro ani ujyalo

Ek aapasma mildainan

Tara aaj

Timra nayanle kehi dhun gaidaichhan

Asambhav bichhadinu timro bhutkaal

Aaj sambhav milan doharidaichha

Shayad timro pratikchha le phal payechha,"

Priye....

Ani kina nagaru ta ma hataar?

 

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Tyo ek jana bhaile ke sanka gareko thiyo, diju le feri vayan garna bhyaisaksechha. Ali parkhinu parchha ni, kam-se-kam.

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first of, welcome to chautari. A Wonderful piece, which is refreshing and energizing one, indeed. Hope to read more of such feelings, please do continue.

 

मनको खुसि मन भित्रै रह्यो

मन फोर्न साकिएन

मन दुख्या बेला भक्कानो फुट्यो

ब्यथा त्यो थामिएन !

 

सुनौलो सपना यो आँखाभरि

जुन-ताराको नगरी

नगरे हुन्थ्यो पिछा मेरो

तिम्रो छाँयाले यसरि !

 

नदेख्दा तिम्लाइ एकपल सखी

सब सुन्य लाग्दछ

मात्र एक झलकले सखी

जिजिबिषा जाग्दछ !

 

कसरि भनुँ फर्केर आउनु

भन्ने म छैन अब हे निष्ठुरी

बगेको खोला फर्केला कसै

छाडेको माया फर्केला र कसरि? !

 

जति म जान्छु झन् नजिक तिम्रो

उति टाढिन्छ्यौ सुस्तरि

म भने हाँस्न खोज्छु देखेर तिम्लाइ

तर्किन्छौ तिमि आँखा तर्दौ कस्तरि !

 

 

साथ पाउँदामा जानिन उहिले

दिल लगाउनलाई

टाढा हुदा ऐले धिक्कारदै आफूलाई

यो आँसु बगाउनलाई !!

 

-सुरेन्द्र आर. श्रेष्ठ

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first of, welcome to chautari. A Wonderful piece, which is refreshing and energizing one, indeed. Hope  to read more of such feelings, please do continue.

 

मनको खुसि मन भित्रै रह्यो

मन फोर्न साकिएन

मन दुख्या बेला भक्कानो फुट्यो

ब्यथा त्यो थामिएन !

 

सुनौलो सपना यो आँखाभरि

जुन-ताराको नगरी

नगरे हुन्थ्यो पिछा मेरो

तिम्रो छाँयाले यसरि !

 

नदेख्दा तिम्लाइ एकपल सखी

सब सुन्य लाग्दछ

मात्र एक झलकले सखी

जिजिबिषा जाग्दछ !

 

कसरि भनुँ फर्केर आउनु

भन्ने म छैन अब हे निष्ठुरी

बगेको खोला फर्केला कसै

छाडेको माया फर्केला र कसरि? !

 

जति म जान्छु झन् नजिक तिम्रो

उति टाढिन्छ्यौ सुस्तरि

म भने हाँस्न खोज्छु देखेर तिम्लाइ

तर्किन्छौ तिमि आँखा तर्दौ कस्तरि !

 

 

साथ पाउँदामा जानिन उहिले

दिल लगाउनलाई

टाढा हुदा ऐले धिक्कारदै आफूलाई

यो आँसु बगाउनलाई !!

 

-सुरेन्द्र आर. श्रेष्ठ 

 

Surendra G, Nice creation. Keep on going !!! Gud luck

Alert : Dherai bhawana ma nabagnu hola hai.....hani pani huna sakchha !!!! biggrin.gif

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